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It was a cold November night. Brian had returned to the band's flat earlier than he had anticipated. Sadly and somewhat angrily, he unlocked the door and slammed it behind him. Freddie stirred in his sleep, but did not wake. Brian's heart flip-flopped as he regarded the form of the dark haired singer. 'He's so beautiful,' Brian thought. 'If only I could tell him how I feel…'
Ever since Queen had started, Brian felt a strange attraction to Freddie. It was as if he'd met him somewhere before. As Brian got to know the gorgeous singer, he realized that he was falling in love.
Brian wandered into the kitchen and placed his keys on the table. Then he stripped down to his underwear and walked into the bedroom.
"Ouch, damn!" Brian exclaimed as he tripped over a chair. Freddie was jolted awake.
"What's going on?" Freddie demanded.
"I tripped over the fucking chair," Brian said, turning on the light. His heart thumped when he saw Freddie watching him.
"Are you okay?" Freddie asked him, genuinely concerned.
"I'll be fine," Brian sighed.
"What's wrong?" Freddie asked.
"Nothing," came the immediate answer.
Freddie looked at him quizzically. Brian looked away.
"I'm going to bed," Brian said glumly.
"Aww, come on, stay up with me," Freddie coaxed. "Now that I'm awake, I'll never get back to sleep."
"Okay," Brian said, trying to hide his joy. "What do you want to do?"
"We could watch the telly."
"Nah, I don't feel like T.V. right now," Brian said.
"You wanna play truth or dare?"
"Sure," Brian said, against his better judgement.
"Come lay with me, darling," Freddie told Brian. "That way we won't have to yell across the room."
Obediently, Brian slipped under the covers next to Freddie's warm body. He shivered with joy.
"Truth or dare?" Freddie asked.
"Truth," Brian said.
"Am I your favorite singer?"
"Of course!" Brian answered. 'You're my favorite person, too,' he thought. "Truth or dare?"
"Truth."
Brian's heart pounded.
"Is it true that you're gay?" Brian asked, then wished he hadn't. Freddie laughed.
"I'm gay as a daffodil, my dear," he replied, grinning. Brian's heart melted.
They played for a long time, neither one asking or daring the other what they really wanted to. Finally, Freddie said:
"I'm getting rather tired."
"Me too," Brian agreed.
"Nighty-night," Freddie said, turning off the light. Brian's heart caught on fire and smoldered in his chest.
"Freddie," he finally managed to croak.
"Yes, Bri?"
"I…I kinda have a…a crush on you," Brian blurted, glad it was dark so that Freddie couldn't see him blushing.
"Really?" Freddie asked calmly. Brian winced and closed his eyes.
"I kinda have a crush on you, too," Freddie told Brian shyly. Brian's eyes flew open.
"You do?"
"Yes, Bri."
Brian giggled. He couldn't help it. He was so nervous. Turning on his side, his eyes searched the darkness for the shape of his lover. He reached toward Freddie and stroked the singer's silky hair, and then he moved closer, cuddling the performer's slender body in his arms.
"I love you, Freddie," he breathed, burying his face in Freddie's ebony hair.
"I love you too, Brian," Freddie said, wrapping his legs around the guitarist. They snuggled closer together.
"Damn it, Bri, I love you!" Freddie said forcefully. Brian squeezed him tight.
"Freddie…Oh, my darling Freddie, I love you, too," he replied, on the verge of happy tears.
"Why'd you wait so long to tell me?" Freddie implored.
"I was afraid you wouldn't love me back."
Silence filled the room, and Brian held Freddie as tight as he could, afraid that if he relinquished his grasp, Freddie would disappear.
"But I do love you," Freddie whispered.
"I know," Brian said. "And I'm glad of that."
Freddie leaned up from Brian's chest and kissed him. Brian kissed him back, his tongue dancing across Freddie's lips. Freddie moaned.
"I love you, I love you," Freddie panted. He drew his legs tighter around Brian and wrapped his arms around his torso.
"Don't ever let me go," Freddie pleaded.
"I'll never let you go," Brian promised.
"My fine friend," Freddie whispered. "Take me wiz you and love me forever."
"My fine friend," Brian breathed. "Forever…"
I hope you guys like it. I LOVED writing it! Damn, what I wouldn't give to be Brian. ;P
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Captainfstarlet Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
:icondancingplz:
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Captainfstarlet Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
I'm not gonna be like my sister... I'm not gonna be like my sister. Aw, hell.

MAYCURY! :iconbouncyplz:
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
It's not worth it- might as well just succumb to the epicness of Maycury. ;)
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Captainfstarlet Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
AWW YEAH!
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Captainfstarlet Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
EVERYBODY IN THE HOUSE SAY FRI-AN! FRI-AN! XD
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Captainfstarlet Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Ayup. We all know what happened when Mary Austin and Chrissie Mullen's backs were turned...
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PaulMcCartney1960 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
ohhh my god :3 i SO wish i was Brian :c :P that was a good story ^-^
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
Oh, me too! ;P Thank you!
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PaulMcCartney1960 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
lol your welcome! :3
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withalittleluck Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
write more frian pleeeeeeeeeease
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
I will, darling, just as soon as I have a spare moment. ;)
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withalittleluck Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
great
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BriansGurl89 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Student Writer
What wudnt I give to be Freddie!!! :P
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Ha, what I wouldn't give to be Brian! :XD:
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BriansGurl89 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student Writer
*sigh*
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Moon418 Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
Aw! I loved it! And I love how you put one of Freddie's quotes in there too...
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
Yay! Thank you! :giggle: ;)
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Moon418 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
oh,you're very welcome
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ChrissieMcKenna Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*I`m as gay as a daffodil, my dear" :love:
Favourite Quote, ever xD
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
Ha, that's one of Freddie's actual quotes! What a man...:love:
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ChrissieMcKenna Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really?That makes it even greater!!!! :D
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KillerQueen4 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
What a sweet and awkward story hehe I wish I was in Brians place hehe
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
Mmm, me too... :XD: Thanks, darling! :heart:
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BadBoyMicHAeL17 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Cute!!! :iconfreddieishappyplz:
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011
Thanks! :D
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Ellie-Chibi-Ninja Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I take it this is set a little before A Day at the Races? I hope so, because I LOVED Freddie 'stache-less and with long hair!
Aw, they're so cute. It's kind of an interesting idea, Queen slash. I've never really thought about it until now, but it's intriguing nonetheless.
Very nice! :iconblushplz:
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Captainfstarlet Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
I prefer Freddie with the 'stache and short hair. Meh.
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011
Yep. :) So did I! I think that look was by far his best, though Freddie would look good with ANY hairstyle, simply because he's Freddie. :D
There's a whole group dedicated to Queen Slash, actually. It's called Queen-Slash. I think this is submitted to that group, actually.

Thank you! :)
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juliahippiemay Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Student
amazing story, and id do anythn to be freddie in that xD
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2010
Thank you! I'd do anything to be Brian... :XD:
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GoldenQueen Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
You loved writing it and I loved READING it!! You´ve got an awesome style of writing. That made my day even better!
(By the way, what the hell does SomaKeehl mean, what´s "Brogan"?) Will you write more Stories like that? I´d love to read more^^
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010
Thank you! Believe me, it made my day better, too. :XD: Brian and Roger, I guess. I'll have to tel him that that's Maylor. Yes! I am working on a Jogger story right now! :D
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SomaKeehl Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
... :ohnoes:

... Brogan? :ohnoes:
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010
Brogan? What's that? :XD:

I take it you didn't like it...? O_O
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SomaKeehl Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like Brian, and Freddie as a singer, but Freddie's just not my cup of tea~ :XD:
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010
He isn't?! O_O Then who is? :P
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SomaKeehl Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Roger~ :D
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010
Ooh. He's hot. :horny:
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SomaKeehl Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwwwwwwwwwright~ :greetings:
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Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010
:XD: But not as hot as Freddie, though he does make a better girl. :P
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