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God loved the two girls at the end of my street.

Everywhere they went, they went together,
hand-in-hand so they didn't get lost,
laughing at everything and nothing
all at once.

He was so proud of them.
They never stole, they never swore,
they brushed their teeth twice a day
and always said their prayers.

It was a gift, said the townspeople,
that two girls as perfect as they were
were born in the same place.
an even greater gift, said they,
that those two were the best of friends.

Long nights spent giggling in rooms with closed doors
was a good thing, back then.

One day,
halfway between their houses
and in the middle of the street,
they realized that they loved each other.

A gaze lingered a moment too long,
a heart beat a little too fast...

They kissed for the first time on a park bench,
hidden from the rest of the world.

God doesn't love them anymore.
Basically how people think when they say that God hates gays... :X

EDIT: Just to get one thing straight, this is a PRO gay poem. I've had some people comment and I don't think they got that...

And HOLY COW, guys! I love you all so much, thank you for the favorites! :tighthug: Free hugs for all of you!
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erschane Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Its really sad and beautiful... But I can relate.
Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
Thank you.
EarthToFantasy Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think God hates gays... its just some people who says it because THEY hate gays. They just want a damn excuse to not make it happen by using our BIG ROLE MODEL of good. Hell they made have just put it in there in the bible to make sure it never happens. They don't know what LOVE really is when they think gays are sinning for loving someone despite their own gender? >:( It doesn't make sense if God actually hates gays. It makes me mad thinking how unfair it is how a lot of people just treat gays as criminals and delusioned people. 
Teru0Chan0 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
people have pulled out there gay hating prom adam and eve (don't think I speled that right) because they were one boy and one girl and they were the first humans on hearth. 
EarthToFantasy Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's true :( Its just an explanation how we began with man and woman and reproduce in the new beginning of human race (a very simple story to explain how we began in a religious way). I think gays existed back then when this story was created but it's just not considered HOW we began. You need male and female to make a baby... unless were completely different species that are not even male and female, then we wouldn't have this religious problem :P Remember back then they didn't know much about much about science or medical science today. How else could they explain it back then? Stories in a religious writing they know.

Still... its just a story that everyone takes too seriously over the years and puts it hard on gays. Male couples and female couples can't make babies together biologically. Its actually consider survival to reproduce. They either adopt or in some cases get a sperm donor for female couples. Maybe that's why its considered sinful because its unnatural? For a real simple story can really affect the whole human race's perspective of gays. Ironically after all our scientific discoveries that being gay is what happens to ALL animals and is normal, we still take this very old story of Adam and Eve too seriously. And there has to be more than one Adam and Eve ... otherwise we all are brothers and sisters and... our genes become deformed and sick biologically. You need fresh genes in order for you to be a healthy human. Remember what happened in royal inbreeding? 

You spelled it right by the way :) And sorry I wrote this too long. :( I'm not religious but its just an opinion from observation. 
Teru0Chan0 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm not religius ether, but I come from a religius family, thats were I have pict it up.
I think it is more like many people hated gay because they were different and ended a legitimat way to hate them so they turnd to religion and twisted the words of the bibel to state what the wanted like:

"you se the story of adan and eve a girl and a boy, that most mean that the ideal human wood love the oposite sex and therefore gay people are eveil and must go to hell!"

or somthing like that.

just my opinion! ^^
Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
Totally agree. Thanks for sharing your opinion. The idea of God as the 'role model' of good is something I hadn't thought of before, but you're right!
I love this so much i love it i love i love it. Thank you for writing it!

I'm pretty sure the bible says that "There is nothing you can do to make God love you less."
I guess some christians just haven't read that part or decided to ignore it...
Mercury-the-Queen Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
Thank YOU for reading it! ;)

I know... It's a hard fact to accept, but some people just use 'The Book' to justify their own opinions.
wolfpup98 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How could god hate gays when he created love? i love this poem...
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